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Include below one or two examples of each type of error that you make in your papers. (If you make five different types of comma errors, make sure to identify each type separately.) For every paper you write, add new errors to this list. Highlight the correction you have made so that you can see the correction easily. After several papers or drafts, you should have recorded the majority of error patterns in your writing. Use this log to proofread your papers before you submit them for a grade.
DateWrong WordingCorrected WordingRule FollowedStrategy Followed12/15/11 (Sample)That must be taken seriously and it must also be taken into account...That must be taken seriously, and it must also be taken into account...Comma required to join two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunctionSearch for and and figure out if it is used to separate two independent clauses or not.12/18/11
(Sample)We took there money and ran.We took their money and ran.Proper use of possessive pronounSearch for there and make sure it is not referring to people.12/25/11
(Sample)When he left town he forgot his wallet.When he left town, he forgot his wallet.A sentence with an introductory element requires a comma. In this case, there is a prepositional clause. Read paper one sentence at a time from the back of the paper to the front to find every sentence that starts with an add-on phrase or clause.
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